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This is half of my entry for round 2. The other half will be up shortly.

There are several things I need to say about this entry....
1. It's not 100% done. I have enough to upload for the tourney, but there is music and maybe voice acting to add when I have time.
2. I know they don't have mouths....When I add aforementioned voices, I'll animate mouths. It almost looks better without them than with motionless mouths.
3. I know it's not great. This is my first flash in years, and I was learning as I went. I appreciate comments on how to make this better, but typing, "it sucks" isn't going to help anyone.
4. If there is anything that needs to be cleared up, ask me. That's what I'm here for :D
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:iconyurushion:
Yurushion Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the swift animation and cuddly chibi scenes! ^^

BTW can you send me a note on how voices work on flash and how the voice actors are supposed to contribute their voice?
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Kosumosu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was actually going to do the "learn as you go" technique, so I'm not the best person to ask. Sorry about that.
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Yurushion Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Okies!
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kakashicoke Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
this is a pretty awesome flash ur so cool *looks up to* ur such a good animator i wish i can be like u and the cat should of been the tarot master cat version then u would of killed him XD mission accomplished XD
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Kosumosu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That would be too easy :D
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kakashicoke Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009
but he would look cute XD and die alexu's plan is complete XD
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Kosumosu Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True, but I think that would mess with the other contestants plotlines :D
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kakashicoke Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009
true true (i am going to make a sequal and alexus is going to be in it too plus others =D but iz going to be super hard)
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Nightsi Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job, Kosu! c: This was well thought out. I like how you made it so that both events happened. Though I do think that at the beginning, it looks sort of like Alexis is sliding across the floor. You could try fixing that by making her bob up and down as she moves. Also, maybe you could do a closeup on Alexis' face in the background when you're showing all the chibis you did. When you have all the chibis flying around on a white background it looks.... a little plain ^^; Otherwise, this is great!
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Kosumosu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That first bit was originally a shadow...but I couldn't figure out how to do it. I'll look and see about the overlay. I'm getting part 2 ready right now, so I will do that afterward. Thanks for the help! :D
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